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posted 7th Oct 2021, 12:01 PM

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view whiteshaix's profile

7th Oct 2021, 12:01 PM

whiteshaix

...That wasn't exactly a surprise, right?
Poor Kai. :°D
Anyway, this was the last page. I'm already working on chapter 2, but this time I want to upload a proper cover image first. It's possible that Atlantis will skip a week or two, depending on my workload and level of inspiration.

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view Panda Cop's profile

7th Oct 2021, 12:41 PM

Panda Cop

I think they will be friends instead of being punished, he probably likes their machismo

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7th Oct 2021, 2:02 PM

whiteshaix

Well, friends is a bit much. Jan doesn't especially like Kai's attitude, but he also knows he could be a good soldier so he's willing to overlook his character flaws, for the moment. The other were mostly caught in the mess, apart from Julian.
Jan's a bit of a "blood knight", he enjoys the fight, but destroying Maria's bar wasn't in his plans for the evening, hahaha (Especially because she sent HIM the bill)

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7th Oct 2021, 5:55 PM

chris-tar

Brains > Braun.

Ha Ha
The expression on Kai's face. So pathetic!

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view whiteshaix's profile

7th Oct 2021, 5:59 PM

whiteshaix

Yeah, he tragically misjudged the "pretty boy". Luckily for him, that cut's not going to scar.
(By the way, he misjudged on so many levels, since Jan is older than him)

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view chris-tar's profile

7th Oct 2021, 5:55 PM

chris-tar

Great costume designs!

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view whiteshaix's profile

7th Oct 2021, 6:01 PM

whiteshaix

Thank you! Some of the costumes in my comics are designed by my sister, but uniforms are my stuff.

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view Microraptor's profile

7th Oct 2021, 9:30 PM

Microraptor

I'm suuuuure Jan won't be too hard to Kai... ;-D

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7th Oct 2021, 9:49 PM

whiteshaix

He's a pragmatist. He's only interested in finding good soldiers for his new squad. ;)
(But he will enjoy Kai's temporary uneasiness)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Oct 2021, 9:55 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm diggin' the look, Jan :D

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view whiteshaix's profile

7th Oct 2021, 10:09 PM

whiteshaix

I couldn't resist giving him the better looking uniform.
After all, they're called "Schwarze Ritter". Maybe Adrian wanted the fashion upgrade, too.

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view Kokoneos's profile

7th Oct 2021, 11:04 PM

Kokoneos

Woops! xD I wonder how they're going to sleep that night.
Probably staring at the ceiling like... tf did I just do?

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view whiteshaix's profile

7th Oct 2021, 11:12 PM

whiteshaix

Hahaha... Hitting their commanding officer and hitting on their commanding officer. Both bad ideas.

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view Kokoneos's profile

8th Oct 2021, 12:49 AM

Kokoneos

This is gonna be one of those memories their brain just summons at random points- like remember the time you really fucked up?

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view KAM's profile

8th Oct 2021, 10:05 AM

KAM

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view Llyrel's profile

10th Oct 2021, 11:27 AM

Llyrel

Well, training is gonna be fun :'D

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view whiteshaix's profile

10th Oct 2021, 11:52 AM

whiteshaix

Oh, totally. Especially once they'll leave Earth. :)

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view Andrew_C's profile

10th Oct 2021, 6:39 PM

Andrew_C

I suppose destroying a bar while going up against Captain Kemeny and a couple friends and not being stretchered away is a pretty good test even if he was just blowing off steam and pulling his punches (I assume).

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10th Oct 2021, 7:50 PM

whiteshaix

You're right!

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view BlueDragon's profile

15th Oct 2021, 7:04 PM

BlueDragon

LOL XD Great note to end the chapter on XD

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